- Tamara is now a witness to the incident that took place
- We show how the consequences of the attackers actions have damaged her life as well as she ran off without helping she feels guilt and go’s out of her way to find her
- Saskia is now Kelly's friend who is introduced at the begining and has altercations with Tamara once she establishes she witnessed the whole thing
- Instead of showing the accident literally, we will have an establishing shot of where it took place and thenm show a montage of Kelly's emotions to what has just happened.
These changes have been made as we think it is more appropriate to the message that we are trying to get across. The fact that we don't show what actually happened, it allows the audience to really think about the situation that these 3 girls have been placed in all because of the consequences of one persons actions. These changes are also easier to shoot which will allow us to have more time for editing.
